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Topic: The old generations often hold traditional ideas about the correct way of life, thinking and behavior. However, some people think that these ideas are not helpful for young people to prepare for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Answer:

In a general type of family, there are always 2 or 3 generations living together including: grandparents, parents and childs. This may help you develope a warm, healthy mental and get useful experiences in life. The problem is the world changing day by day, childs are growing up , and some old opinions doesn't help to keep up with the time. Sometimes you have to figure out what is not only good but also correct for existing.

Firstly, it can be said that, old generations such as our grandparents, our parents, they keep traditional ideas about the correct way of life, thinking and behavior, and these help us a lot in building correct bases of characters. People who are well-educated of ethical and reason in childhood will always know how to behave correctly when they grow up, even being failed or depressed. You could become a rich or poor , famous or just normal one, but the most important thing of a living is to be a kind one. And those boring, complicated traditional things that olders give us always do their job very well.

In other hand, stormy development of technologies changes the world in every aspects of life. It makes everything become significantly easier than in the past. This leads to different standards of communication, fashion, or even how you eat. Your modern style helps you in building personality, feeling more confident than those outdated fashion clothes. Pressures from work takes you a lot of time so that you can’t afford to visit your relatives regularly, have to buy fast-food instead of preparing a full meals and competitions from earning a living makes you become iron. And the important thing is that you are always open-minded, up –to-date or you will be eliminated. Many complicated troubles of the modern society you yourself have to find out the way to resolve.

To my conclusion, learn to harmonines between experiences of the olders and keep your mind opened may help you to find yourseft a correct way to behave.