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Topic: Some people think that we can use animals in any ways for the benefits of human beings. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Answer:

Human being is the highest form of animal, dominate lives of other species on the planet. While I accept that we can use some animals for the benefits of human beings, I would argue that we should protect rare animals which are going to extinct and keep ecogystem balanced.

People use ingredients from animal for making food, medicine and transport. It is said that some kinds of animals are indispensible for the growth of human beings. For example, a person can not live without necessary vitamins, protein...founded in meat. Despite of development of technology, animals such as horse, donkey...are still used as effective transporters somewhere in the world. With those animals which are supposed to threaten human's lives, people find how to control or kill them.

In another view, through billion years of evolutionary, human and animal have been sharing a common living environment on Earth. This makes an ecosystem where human beings and animal both play part to balance and harmonize. Animal is not only served but also to be friends with people. Some kinds of rare animals are going to extinct. Their loss may directly or indirectly affect to human beings.

To conclude, I agree that we can use animals for the benefits of human beings but we should consider how to protect natural ecosytem cause once we break the balance, it would be very difficult to recover.