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Shaliny Posted 11 years ago
Letter Writing

pLS HELP ME TO CHECK AND CORRECT MY COVER LETTER..URGENT!

Dear Sir/Madam
Re: Job Opportunities in Quality Control or R&D Department (DOES THIS SUB SOUNDS GOOD?? OR CAN I REPLACE "IN" WITH "WITHIN"??

I am Shaliny a recent Bachelor of Biotechnology graduate from MSU and would like to express my interest in working within your organization. I am writing to enquire whether you have any employment opportunities available in Quality Control or R&D Department suitable for my academic qualification. I enclose my CV for your reference. ( PLS HELP ME TO CORRECT THIS PARAGRAPH)
  

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My name is Shaliny. I have recently completed bachelor's degree in Biotechnology at MSU. I am very much interested in working in your organization.

  • My name is Shaliny.
  • I have recently completed bachelor's degree in Biotechnology at MSU.
  • I am very much interested in working in your organization.
  • I would like to know if there are any employment opportunities in Quality Control or R&D Department in your organization which suit my academic qualification.
  • I enclose my CV for your perusal.
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My name is Shaliny. I have recently completed bachelor's degree in Biotechnology at MSU.
I am very much interested in working in your organization.
I would like to know if there are any employment opportunities in Quality Control or R&D Department in your organization which suit my academic qualification.

I enclose my CV for your perusal.

Thank you for kind consideration
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vsureshI have recently completed bachelor's degree
I have recently completed a bachelor's degree
vsureshI would like to know if there are any employment opportunities in Quality Control or R&D Department
I would like to know if there are any employment opportunities in Quality Control or the R&D Department

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