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Moli Posted 17 years ago
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Pls help me revise the article,thanks!

A poem to the kids who study abroad

It is the midnight,are you doing part-time job or having a rest?You promised me to take care of yourself.Pay close attention to the weather forcast there and dress yourself more warmly in cold weather.do your best to study hard and achive success in the examination.Making more friends will make your life colorful.Be brave to face the difficulty in the reality,you might play the chess or look the photo when you feel tired.Be optimistic and active,and lead a meaningful life.Don’t forget to contact with me,because I aways miss you,I hope you are proud of yourself in future.
  

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This is not a poem. Is this how you wish to format it?

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This is not a poem. Is this how you wish to format it?
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you are right,I write the poem in chinese.

pls correct the diary for me,thanks a lot!
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Always leave one space after periods and commas.

It is midnight. Are you working at your part-time job or having a rest? You promised me that you would take care of yourself. Pay close attention to the weather forecast there, and dress more warmly in cold weather. Do your best to st
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I appreciate your help.

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