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Jiangyueming Posted 13 years ago
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Pls help me correct three sentences? Thank you!

A program, named take me out, is pretty popular in my country. But in the program, girls only dated with wealthy people, which, in some extend, encouraged the worship of money. They are proud of owning a large number of money and showing their luxuries. It conveys an extreme wrong value to audiences.
  

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A program -> One program take me out -> don't forget to capitalise titles in the program, girls only dated -> girls only date in some extend -> to some extent a large number of money -> a large amount of money showing their luxuries -> use showing off an extreme wrong value -> extremely wrong values

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  • A program -> One program take me out -> don't forget to capitalise titles in the program, girls only dated -> girls only date in some extend -> to some extent a large number of money -> a large amount of money showing their luxuries -> use showing off an extreme wrong value -> extremely wrong values
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A program -> One program
take me out -> don't forget to capitalise titles Emotion: wink
in the program, girls only dated ->
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jiangyuemingA program, named take me out, is pretty popular in my country. But in the program, girls only dated with wealthy people, which, in some extend, encouraged the worship of money. They are proud of owning a large number of money and showing their luxuries. It conveys an extreme wrong value to audiences.
A program called "Take Me Out" is very popular i
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