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Jiangyueming Posted 13 years ago
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Pls help me correct three sentences. Thank you.

After shooting an police officer, Tsarnaevs kidnaped a men and used his card to withdraw 800 dollars. However, the strange thing is Tsarnaevs left the hostage alive who soon called the police. Undoubtedly, the police caught him in a few hours and we should be thankful that decision may have saved numerous innocent people.
  

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Here are some suggestions. After shooting an a police officer, the Tsarnaevs kidnap p ed a m a n and used his card to withdraw 800 dollars. However, the strange thing is the Tsarnaevs left the hostage alive who and he soon called the police.

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  • Here are some suggestions.
  • After shooting an a police officer, the Tsarnaevs kidnap p ed a m a n and used his card to withdraw 800 dollars.
  • However, the strange thing is the Tsarnaevs left the hostage alive who and he soon called the police.
  • Undoubtedly, The police caught him in them after a few hours and we should be thankful .
  • T hat decision may have saved numerous innocent people.
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Here are some suggestions.
After shooting an a police officer, the Tsarnaevs kidnapped a man and used his card to withdraw 800 dollars. However, the strange thing is
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Actually, the police only caught one of the brothers after a few hours. The other was not caught until late the next day.
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Actually, the police only caught one of the brothers after a few hours. The other was not caught until late the next day.
True. Perhaps we could say police caught up with them after a few hours or we could say this hastened their subsequent capture.
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