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Jiangyueming Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Pls help me correct this sentence, thank you

A few people report that they have near-death experiences; after death soul will separate from body and cross a white channel where their relatives are greeting them on the other side.
  

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Several people report that they have had near-death experience s: after death, the soul separates from the body and crosses a white channel where their relatives greet them on the other side.

  • Several people report that they have had near-death experience s: after death, the soul separates from the body and crosses a white channel where their relatives greet them on the other side.
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Several people report that they have had near-death experiences: after death, the soul separates from the body and crosses a white channel where their relatives greet them on the other side.
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Thank you, Mister. Can I use "had" instead of "have had"? When I described their experiences, should I use past tense?
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jiangyueming Can I use "had" instead of "have had"? When I described their experiences, should I use past tense?
You may, but it makes it more interesting for the reader if you use present perfect.

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