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The table below gives information about the percentage of land covered by forest in various countries in 1990 and 2005 with estimated figures for 2015.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The table illustrates data about the percentage of earth which was surrounded by jungles in 4 different countries during 1990 and 2005 with estimated data for 2015. It can be observed that the amount of land covered by forest went up through time in New Zealand and Chile. However , that of Brazil and Australia dwindled from 1990 to 2015. And Brazilian land was always the most to be overlaid.
From 1990 to 2015 , New Zealand's percentage of earth covered by forest went up from 28.8 percent to 32.3 percent, and was still the second in comparison with the others. However , despite having least land that was surrounded by forest , it turned into the third over four countries with an upsurge from 20.4 to 22.0
On the other hand , the percentage of earth shaded by trees in Australia experienced a period of diminishment. It rosed sharply by 1.9 percent from 1990 to 2015. Similarly, that of Brazil also declined gradually to 53.5 percent. However , Brazil still surpassed the other three to have the most land covered by the forest.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The table illustrates data about the percentage of earth which was surrounded by jungles in 4 different countries during 1990 and 2005 with estimated data for 2015. It can be observed that the amount of land covered by forest went up through time in New Zealand and Chile. However , that of Brazil and Australia dwindled from 1990 to 2015. And Brazilian land was always the most to be overlaid.
From 1990 to 2015 , New Zealand's percentage of earth covered by forest went up from 28.8 percent to 32.3 percent, and was still the second in comparison with the others. However , despite having least land that was surrounded by forest , it turned into the third over four countries with an upsurge from 20.4 to 22.0
On the other hand , the percentage of earth shaded by trees in Australia experienced a period of diminishment. It rosed sharply by 1.9 percent from 1990 to 2015. Similarly, that of Brazil also declined gradually to 53.5 percent. However , Brazil still surpassed the other three to have the most land covered by the forest.
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The table below gives information about the percentage of land covered by forest in various countries in 1990 and 2005 with estimated figures for 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
- The table below gives information about the percentage of land covered by forest in various countries in 1990 and 2005 with estimated figures for 2015.
- Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
- Write at least 150 words.
- The table illustrates data about the percentage of earth which was surrounded by jungles in 4 different countries during 1990 and 2005 with estimated data for 2015.
- It can be observed that the amount of land covered by forest went up through time in New Zealand and Chile.
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The table below gives information about the percentage of land covered by forest in various countries in 1990 and 2005 with estimated figures for 2015.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The table illustrates data about the percentage of earth which was surround
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The table illustrates data about the percentage of earth which was surround
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"Earth" is not an appropriate word to use here. I highlighted text with mistakes or unnatural English.
The table illustrates presents/ gives data about the percentage of earth which was surrounded by jungles (??? Do you mean bare land that had forests on all sides
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