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I would recommend cafeteria to add Hamburger on food menu. First, my friends like hamburgers, they eat Chinise food every day and it’s boring to them. They want to try something new. Hamburger is a good choice. But KFC and Burger King are too far from our campus they don’t want to go outside the campus only for hamburgers.

Mister Micawber · Accepted Answer

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I would recommend cafeteria to add Hamburger on ~~food~~ menu. First, my friends like hamburgers, they eat Chinise food every day and it’s boring to them. They want to try something new. Hamburger is a good choice. But KFC and Burger King are too far from our campus they don’t want to go outside the campus only for hamburgers.

Jiangyueming · Answer

Thanks. Below is my revision: I would recommend our cafeteria to add hamburger in menu. First, my friends like hamburgers. They eat Chinise food every day and it’s boring for them. They want to try something new. Hamburger is a good choice. But KFC and Burger King are too far from our campus. They don’t want to go out of the campus in order for hamburgers.

Mister Micawber · Answer

I would recommend our cafeteria to add hamburgers to the menu. First, my friends like hamburgers. They eat Chinese food every day, and it’s boring for them. They want to try something new. Hamburger is a good choice. But KFC and Burger King are too far from our campus. They don’t want to go off campus just for hamburgers.

Pls help me correct these sentences. Thank you!

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