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Wangqh2696122 Posted 13 years ago
Letter Writing
Pls help me correct my letter
Dear Tom,
I am happy to receive your email asking about my competition. Thank you for your concern. But I regret to tell you that I was eliminated in the preliminary contest.
On reflection, I have found two reasons behind my disqualification. One is that I didn’t attached enough importance to it and therefore was not well prepared. The other is I suffered stage fright in the contest, which, I think, may come from my inadequate preparation.
From this experience, I have learned that success favors those who are well equipped. In future, whatever I do, I must do it well.
I am happy to receive your email asking about my competition. Thank you for your concern. But I regret to tell you that I was eliminated in the preliminary contest.
On reflection, I have found two reasons behind my disqualification. One is that I didn’t attached enough importance to it and therefore was not well prepared. The other is I suffered stage fright in the contest, which, I think, may come from my inadequate preparation.
From this experience, I have learned that success favors those who are well equipped. In future, whatever I do, I must do it well.
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I have underlined the problem areas: Dear Tom, I am happy to receive your email asking about my competition. Thank you for your concern . But I regret to tell you that I was eliminated in the preliminary contest.
- I have underlined the problem areas: Dear Tom, I am happy to receive your email asking about my competition.
- Thank you for your concern .
- But I regret to tell you that I was eliminated in the preliminary contest.
- On reflection, I have found two reasons behind my disqualification.
- One is that I didn’t attached enough importance to it and therefore was not well prepared.
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I have underlined the problem areas:
Dear Tom,
I am happy to receive your email asking about my competition. Thank you for your concern. But I regret to tell you that I was eliminated in the preliminary contest.
On reflection, I have found two reasons behind my disqualification. One is that I didn’t attached enough importance to it and therefo
Dear Tom,
I am happy to receive your email asking about my competition. Thank you for your concern. But I regret to tell you that I was eliminated in the preliminary contest.
On reflection, I have found two reasons behind my disqualification. One is that I didn’t attached enough importance to it and therefo
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wangqh2696122Can you suggest a substitute for "concern "?interest
'Concern' includes worry or upset.
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