Pls help me check grammar and sentence structure. Thanks

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Le Chi is from China, who is the prettiest of a group of Asian girls. Le Chi is an only child, her father is a businessman, and her mother was an actress. Her family is wealthy, but it is not happy. Although she doesn't speak English well, she is inseparable with British, American or other European students. The Japanese girl Yutaka is a tremendous contrast with Le Chi. Yutaka is mature and not beautiful, so she lives self-contained. Yutaka studied archeology, a discipline that always looks back to the past, so she seems very strange.

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slide mango 481Le Chi is from China, who is the prettiest of a group of Asian girls.

Le Chi is from China, who is the prettiest of a group of Asian girls.

Is China a girl?

This sentence seems wrong. Here is a relative clause about China.

Le Chi is from China, which is the most populous country in the world.

Here is a relative clause about Le Chi.

Le Chi, who is the prettiest one in a group of Asian girls, is from China.

Here is a sentence with two relative clauses

Le Chi, who is the prettiest one in a group of Asian girls, is from China, which is the most populous country in the world.

slide mango 481Le Chi is an only child, her father is a businessman, and her mother was an actress.

That is two different sentences. It is wrong to connect them with a comma.

Le Chi is an only child. Her father is a businessman, and her mother was an actress.

slide mango 481Although she doesn't speak English well, she is inseparable with British, American or other European students.

I do not know what you mean. Does she look like these other students, or are they her best friends?

Although she doesn't speak English well, she is inseparable from her best friends, British, American and other European students.

She doesn't speak English well, but otherwise she is ~~inseparable~~ indistinguishable from the British, American or other European students.

slide mango 481The Japanese girl Yutaka is a tremendous contrast with Le Chi. Yutaka is mature and not beautiful, so she lives self-contained. Yutaka studied archeology, a discipline that always looks back to the past, so she seems very strange.

The Japanese girl Yutaka is very different from Le Chi. Yutaka is mature and not beautiful, so she lives by herself. Yutaka studies archeology, a discipline that always looks back to the past, so she seems very strange to the other students.

Pls help me check grammar and sentence structure. Thanks

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