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The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors who satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

My essay:

The table shows the total number of visitors who go to visit Ashdown Museum during the year before and after refurbishment. The pie charts compare the proportion of tourists satisfaction when they visit Ashdown Museum.

Overall, the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum in table have an upward trend. In pie charts, the number of visitors who are extremely satisfied and satisfied increase gradually, while other who are dissatisfied or very dissatisfied go down.

During the year before refurbishment, Ashdown Museum had 74000 people to pay visit. After refurbishment, the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum go up gradually, at 92000 people. It increase by 18000 people.

15% tourists were highly satisfied when they go to Ashdown Museum before refurbishment. This proportion rise, at 35% during the year after refurbishment. The proportion of visitors who answer that they are satisfied increase form 30 % to 40%. In contrast, during the year after refurbushment, the proportion of tourists who feel dissatisfied and extremely dissatisfied go down. It decrease to 15% and 5% respectively. It go down gradually. Visitors who have no response remained stable at 5%.