PLS!!! Help me by checking my task 1_ Tourist attaction

Topic: The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999.

My task 1:

The pie chart illustrates the proportion of people who visited four types of tourist attraction: wildlife parks and zoos, historic houses and monuments, museum and galleries, and theme parks ; and five difference places in theme park in Britain in 1999

Overall, the percentage of visitors in them parks has the largest segment, while the opposite true for the proportion of people who visited wildlife parks and zoos

In 1999, the proportion of visitors in wildlife parks and zoos had the smallest segment, with 90%. Following wildlife parks and zoos, 16% visitors came to historic houses and monuments. In the same time, the percentage of people who visited museums and galleries; theme parks was 37% and 38% respectively

In the theme parks sector, Blackpool Pleasure Beach was the most popular whose its figure accounted for 47%. Around 17% and 16% visitors went to Alton towers and Pleasureland, Southport respectively. The percentage of people who visited Chessington World of Adventures and Legoland were equal at 10%.