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Some parents choose private schools for their children. In my opinion, I completely disagree with the idea that families don't need to contribute to state schools through taxes because their children study at private schools.

First, private schools connect with national education in mant aspects. For example, in Vietnam, private schools depend on general curriculum content form state education system. In addition, private schools usually connect with state schools to organise many activities which help students from two kind of school share their experience of studying and learn by this.

Second, taxes for education beneficial for all members of society, especially poor students. It gives poor students chances to study continue and boarden their horizons. This is one of the best thing to improve people's thinking and responsibility about taxes. People can have equal opportunities to have high quality education. Besides, education's taxes can open many chances to develop general education and attract a lot of interest from international schools. This will be really helpful for students from both private schools and state schools. They can have more choice about scholaships.

In conclusion, I believe that families should pay as much as taxes which support the state education system as they pay tution fee's private schools.