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Vivy Posted 16 years ago
Letter Writing
Pls help me
Dear moderator, please correct my letter to my colleagues....
thank you....
Dear all,
Regarding your Annual Leave (AL) and Day Payment (DP) 2010, that should be all taken before March 2011; I would like to remind you that it’s the time to release about the half of yours. Fyi, S&M Dept. predicts that the hotel occupancy during the coming fasting month won't be high. So please prepare your schedule as soon as possible, especially the one during that period.
Please use Personnel Action Form (PAF) in order to avoid any data discrepancy between HRD's and your Department's and for other administrative purposes.
Thank you and best regards,
Vivy
thank you....
Dear all,
Regarding your Annual Leave (AL) and Day Payment (DP) 2010, that should be all taken before March 2011; I would like to remind you that it’s the time to release about the half of yours. Fyi, S&M Dept. predicts that the hotel occupancy during the coming fasting month won't be high. So please prepare your schedule as soon as possible, especially the one during that period.
Please use Personnel Action Form (PAF) in order to avoid any data discrepancy between HRD's and your Department's and for other administrative purposes.
Thank you and best regards,
Vivy
Top answer
Hi Vivy; Welcome to the Forums! It is difficult to suggest reasonable changes without understanding the situation in your company. There were a couple of places that I did not understand - indicated by the question marks.
- Hi Vivy; Welcome to the Forums!
- It is difficult to suggest reasonable changes without understanding the situation in your company.
- There were a couple of places that I did not understand - indicated by the question marks.
- Here are some important reminders for you.
- ) about half of it.
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Hi Vivy;
Welcome to the Forums!
It is difficult to suggest reasonable changes without understanding the situation in your company. There were a couple of places that I did not understand - indicated by the question marks.
Here are some important reminders for you. Your Annual Leave (AL) and Day Payment (DP) 2010 should be all taken before March 2011, and it’s time to
Welcome to the Forums!
It is difficult to suggest reasonable changes without understanding the situation in your company. There were a couple of places that I did not understand - indicated by the question marks.
Here are some important reminders for you. Your Annual Leave (AL) and Day Payment (DP) 2010 should be all taken before March 2011, and it’s time to
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Dear Alphecca,
Thank you very much for your help. For the first question mark, the answer is: yes, I do. Then for the second, what I mean is: besides avoiding any data discrepancy, using PAF is also useful for other administrative purposes.
Thank you very much for your help. For the first question mark, the answer is: yes, I do. Then for the second, what I mean is: besides avoiding any data discrepancy, using PAF is also useful for other administrative purposes.
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