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I have been asked to write an introduction and profile & general rules and regulations for a upcoming kindergarten school for non-native speakers. Following is my I draft regarding intoduction and profile. Kindly check, correct or rephrase. I have to submit within a week.

Introduction:

Mother Care is established in 2003 for the cause of imparting quality education to children. It aims to offer motherly care to children. It shall start from the current academic year 2004-2005 from Pre-nursery & Nursery levels. Admissions are opened from 11.4.2004.

Management:

The School Management, with the help and guidance of professionals and educationists, shall innovatively design its curricular and co-curricular activities for a meaningful and socially relevant education. While its main focus is on quality education, extra-curricular activities and overall development of the pupils are also considered equally important. In order to achieve excellence, the Management ensures availability of qualified, experienced and well trained staff at all times. The Committee ensures that the teachers are also updating their teaching skills from time to time and prepared to adapt latest teaching methods. It also determined to provide congenial atmosphere, safe & healthy surroundings and necessary facilities for a healthy development of pupils in the school.

Staff:

Mother Care recruits qualified, trained and experienced teaching staff who employ the latest teaching & learning methodologies. Teachers will strive hard to provide qualitative instructions for all round development of the pupils. Teachers are sufficiently capable to conduct fun and practical activities of classroom. Teachers, with their kind and affectionate attitude, will try to create interest in the young minds to attend the school.

Parent Teacher Meeting:

Every second Saturday of each month is provided for parents to meet with teachers to know the performance of their kids. The progress card of pupils after every test and examination shall be issued for review of the parents.

Suggestions & Complaints:

Mother Care welcomes suggestions from the parents. Complaints will be promptly attended.



PROFILE:

Mother Care is committed to qualitative education right from the very basic level. It is dedicated to the cause of imparting education to all sections of the society and laying more emphasis on weaker sections of the society. It provides ideal environment for kids to learn, play, grow and live up to aspirations and expectations of parents.

Mother Care believes that the basic education plays a vital role in the development of children. It considers the purpose of school is beyond making a child just literate and attaches importance to growth of overall personality of children and prepare them to a challenging future.

Mother Care is offering the services of qualified & professional teaching staff and a sound administrative set up of the institution. The School is well equipped with various educational aids and play things.

The School believes that a child is not a thing to mould but a person to unfold and thus explore its potentials and help the child to grow in a right direction with a positive approach.

Thus, the school is committed to give a right beginning to a great academic career of children and making them responsible citizens of tomorrow.

Teaching Methods:

The School has adopted ‘Montessory’ concept of education at nursery level. It has applied ‘learn with fun’ methods to provide a joyful atmosphere of learning for the children. The School applies various interesting methods of play & learn. Teachers, with the help of play items and their caring & friendly attitude, help the children in removing the fear of school from their minds and create interest towards attending the school.

Play Ground:

The School has spacious & safe play ground bounded by walls. The play ground is free from all ‘road & traffic hazards’. It is equipped with play items like swing, sliding stone, tri-cycles etc., etc., and many more will be added.





Care & Attention:

Individual care will be provided to each and every child. Children absent for certain genuine reasons will get extra care to equalize them with others. Children of single
parent or illiterate parents, if any, will also be taken care of to compensate sufficiently the missing training at home.

Aya/Maid services are provided to take care of children during the school hours.

Future Programme:

Once the school is reached the sufficient strength at UKG level, the school will add a higher class every year up to the high school. At the primary level and beyond, while the main emphasis is on studies, the school gives importance to physical education and extra-curricular activities also. The school, if need be, will hire the extra

services of professionals to provide Extra Curricular Activities and to conduct Special Talents Classes. To promote literary and extra-curricular activities, the school at Primary


level & beyond, the children will be grouped into houses to encourage keen and healthy competition in all aspects of their school life.

The school has planned to introduce transport service for school children in near future.

The school will introduce Computers at higher levels.

Moral Values:

Form an integral part of life. This will be imbibed in students in the form of skits in morning assembly and discipline throughout the day.
  

Top answer

Hi, sounds like a nice initiative. Good luck with it. I was unsure about the program for Pre-nursery & Nursery children.

  • Hi, sounds like a nice initiative.
  • Good luck with it.
  • I was unsure about the program for Pre-nursery & Nursery children.
  • Has it started already?
  • What you’ve prepared is basically competent though it could be better.
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Hi, sounds like a nice initiative. Good luck with it. I was unsure about the program for Pre-nursery & Nursery children. Has it started already?

What you’ve prepared is basically competent though it could be better. I don’t think we have enough time to work on it before Friday. Is it Montessori or Montessory?
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How could it be better? How can it be improved?

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