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Miyabi Posted 13 years ago
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pls help for grammar
Hi, teachers!
Can you help and check the following grammar for me please:
Thank you!
“This is definitely not an easy decision for me to made, but today I have to ask for resignation from both of you. The reason comes to this because I want to spent more time to my family, particularly for my 2 years old daughter, who is going to start to attend her pre-nursery school in this middle of August. As a first child mom, i didn't expect that there are so much things i have to prepare for her first schooling, for instance, pre school body check up need to make, there are serval school seminars we are invited to attend, the first week of school need parents to accompany together… etc. Honestly, I really don't want to miss all these important occasions and precious times being with my kid. My husband and I found that she needs more of our time to be cared, especially i think in this first
schooling period.
Concering all about these, i have to decide to give up my presebt job here in order to spare more time to be with her.
I sincerely thank you both of you for giving opportunity for me to work here. And all the support and trust in my ability. I have been learning a lot from Michael. He really is a very good and outstanding supervisor. His loyalty, effectency and passion in work made me admire and respect him so much. In the meantime, I also have good time working with other colleagues in office. Wendy and Angela also guide and help me a lot in every aspect of my work. I enjoyed working with all of them as a team and united to accomplish our goal of providing good and “faultless” service to our customers!
Lastly, I am so grateful to be one of the staffs in the company, though it is a pity that the time of working here is not long. I am so gratitude for both of your kindly support and understanding. As last month my daughter went into the hospital, I was not supposed to have, but i got a paid leaves from you. Besides, all the privileges as company's yummy foods you always share with us. And Alex, you are always that kind and generous that once offered a product from company as a gift for my daughter!
Can you help and check the following grammar for me please:
Thank you!
“This is definitely not an easy decision for me to made, but today I have to ask for resignation from both of you. The reason comes to this because I want to spent more time to my family, particularly for my 2 years old daughter, who is going to start to attend her pre-nursery school in this middle of August. As a first child mom, i didn't expect that there are so much things i have to prepare for her first schooling, for instance, pre school body check up need to make, there are serval school seminars we are invited to attend, the first week of school need parents to accompany together… etc. Honestly, I really don't want to miss all these important occasions and precious times being with my kid. My husband and I found that she needs more of our time to be cared, especially i think in this first
schooling period.
Concering all about these, i have to decide to give up my presebt job here in order to spare more time to be with her.
I sincerely thank you both of you for giving opportunity for me to work here. And all the support and trust in my ability. I have been learning a lot from Michael. He really is a very good and outstanding supervisor. His loyalty, effectency and passion in work made me admire and respect him so much. In the meantime, I also have good time working with other colleagues in office. Wendy and Angela also guide and help me a lot in every aspect of my work. I enjoyed working with all of them as a team and united to accomplish our goal of providing good and “faultless” service to our customers!
Lastly, I am so grateful to be one of the staffs in the company, though it is a pity that the time of working here is not long. I am so gratitude for both of your kindly support and understanding. As last month my daughter went into the hospital, I was not supposed to have, but i got a paid leaves from you. Besides, all the privileges as company's yummy foods you always share with us. And Alex, you are always that kind and generous that once offered a product from company as a gift for my daughter!
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This was definitely not an easy decision for me to make , but today I have to offer my resignation to both of you. The reason it has come to this is that I want to spent more time with my family, particularly for my two-year-old daughter, who is going to start to attend her pre-nursery school in the middle of August. Being a first-time mom, I didn't expect that there to be so many things I have to prepare for her first schooling, for instance, a pre-school medical check-up must be arranged , there are we are invited to attend several school seminars, for the first week of school a parent must accompany the child, e tc.
- This was definitely not an easy decision for me to make , but today I have to offer my resignation to both of you.
- The reason it has come to this is that I want to spent more time with my family, particularly for my two-year-old daughter, who is going to start to attend her pre-nursery school in the middle of August.
- Being a first-time mom, I didn't expect that there to be so many things I have to prepare for her first schooling, for instance, a pre-school medical check-up must be arranged , there are we are invited to attend several school seminars, for the first week of school a parent must accompany the child, e tc.
- Honestly, I really don't want to miss all these important occasions and precious times being with my kid.
- My husband and I are finding that she needs more of our time to be cared for , especially , I think , in this first schooling period.
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This was definitely not an easy decision for me to make, but today I have to offer my resignation to both of you. The reason it has come to this is that
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