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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
Letter Writing

Pls, have a couple of mns to check my e-mail answer!!

Would be very grateful if someone take a couple of mns and glance through my answer to and a job offer. Please feel free to add/delete/modify in order to improve the letter




----------------My answer----------------

Dear ABt,

I would like to thank you for contacting me and for this great opportunity you are offering, however I would like to let you know that I'm starting a business course by mid-october in London. As for my freinds I will contact them regarding this opportunity and in case they are interested they will contact you on the details given in you e-mail.

Kind regards,

---------------------------------The text received, job offer-----------------------------

I came across your information online, and was inquiring to see if you or anyone in your network were opened to new opportunities. We are currently in search of mechanical engineer within the France. Please, forward my contact information to anyone who you think would be interested and benefit from this opportunity.

----------------------------End of the text received---------------------------
  

Top answer

Hi, Dear ABt, I would like to thank you for contacting me, and for this great opportunity that you are offering. Howver, I have to inform you that I'm starting a business course in London, in mid-October. As you suggest, I will contact my friends regarding this opportunity.

  • Hi, Dear ABt, I would like to thank you for contacting me, and for this great opportunity that you are offering.
  • Howver, I have to inform you that I'm starting a business course in London, in mid-October.
  • As you suggest, I will contact my friends regarding this opportunity.
  • Kind regards and thanks again, Clive
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Hi,

Dear ABt,

I would like to thank you for contacting me, and for this great opportunity that you are offering. Howver, I have to inform you that I'm starting a business course in London, in mid-October. As you suggest, I will contact my friends regarding this opportunity.

Kind regards and t
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Thank you very much Clive, that was really hepful!!!

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