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Science finds that by studying the behavior of three-year-old children they can predict if they will grow up to be criminals. To what extent is criminality related to human nature? Is it possible to stop children from being a criminal when they grow up?

There is a wide variety of scientific researches that indicates the potential behavior of children in three-years relating directly to the commit of crime in the future. This problem is caused by some factors, and it should be dealt with some solutions.

To begin with, some dysfunctional families have a negative impact on the mental development of three-year-old children. To illustrate, children in formative years tend to mimic the behavior of adults who reach out to them on a daily basis. For example, before many families end in divorce, the pattern of behaviors of their parents directly influences their perception. Second, some children are overprotective leading to the misunderstanding of many problems in the world outside the family such as they do not know how to handle an urgent situation which is the result of less practical thinking. A typical example of this is that the excessively parental involvement in their private life causing the over independence on parents and it is hard to put things in perspective to solve any problems in life and they tend to blame others after making troubles. This is the reason why they are likely to commit a crime.

Furthermore, feasible solutions can be taken to tackle the aforementioned problem. First, parents should give reward for their children after completing any tasks relating to household chores or studying. For example, let them go out of their comfort zones to face challenging problems or make friends to exchange knowledge and broaden their horizon to a certain degree. The most important thing is that do not throw their way behind children’s consciousness, let them realize everything. Second, parents should teach them about moral values, good manners. In contrast, parents should not enforce some punishments on children like domestic violence which makes them scare to death and have a tendency to act as a defense with all people surrounding them.

In conclusion, it is clear that there are various reasons why the behavior of 3-years-old children can be indicated to be a crime in the future, and some measures could be taken to solve this problem.