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When a country develops in technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out, It is pointless to try and keep them alive.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Innovation and evolution of technology establishes new means to produce the result with less efforts, cost and less time. But it impacts the traditional methods, human resource and it's skills in a way where it may be extinct soon. This essay agrees completely that technology helps not only in better production, but it does eradicate the traditional methods and skills.

Describing further, the negative effect of technology, the very first fact appear in front of entrepreneur is the less cost, less time and less labor. These above three factors are very crucial to gain competitive advantage in market and removing the old methods of traveling The best paradigm, introducing of metro train in cities where it reduces the cost of travel n time, more ease in traveling and infrastructure of train tracks based on pillars leaves the best use of technology which was not possible with actual train where the locomotives are installed with train. In addition to this, the driver and manual efforts to maintain the metro train is very less where the Railway spent in training of drivers for their locomotives.

Yet, the traditional methods which are expensive and use more cost and resource, also have advantage which is known at later stage. for example. Since the man has adopted more ways of traveling ie... Walking to cycling, cycling to scooter and Scooter to car, has brought his health down. The man in the city is not healthy and polluted air, water and food also aggravates his health more.

The essay in nutshell describes the negative impacts of technology and in subsequent paragraph presents the positive side of traditional methods ensures that it strongly favors of traditional methods and skills which must not be lost. Traditional methods are also known for its quality and yes it is sure the quality demands time, resource, cost and efforts. Therefore, new technology should be inculcate in practice where it is really need for example industry infrastructure but if it is related with the bread of skill person, then old methods must not be relinquished

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