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Sarah88 Posted 17 years ago
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Pls edit it.

Below is an email I would like to send to my teammates, please let me know if below it’s correct and I have express my thoughts clearly and positively.

Dear team,

Happy New Year!

I have reconciled your revenue list with Finance, so if you would like to know your revenue details of 2008, please feel free to contact me.

Secondly, please be reminded that we are approaching the Client Satisfaction Survey deadline, so urgently chase your clients for their feedback. (By the way, I have chased them for feedback three time by now, so please help me to edit it, so they can tell that this is important.)

Many thanks,

  

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Dear Team , Happy New Year! I have reconciled your revenue list with Finance, so if you would like to know your revenue details for 2008, please feel free to contact me. Also , please be reminded that we are approaching the Client Satisfaction Survey deadline, so you must urgently importune your clients for their feedback now!

— Mister Micawber

  • Dear Team , Happy New Year!
  • I have reconciled your revenue list with Finance, so if you would like to know your revenue details for 2008, please feel free to contact me.
  • Also , please be reminded that we are approaching the Client Satisfaction Survey deadline, so you must urgently importune your clients for their feedback now!
  • Many thanks, .
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Dear Team,

Happy New Year!

I have reconciled your revenue list with Finance, so if you would like to know your revenue details for 2008, please feel free to contact me.

Also, please be reminded that we are approaching the Client Satisfaction Survey deadline, so you must urgently importune your clients for their feedback
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