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Nana555 Posted 15 years ago
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Pls could you correct my short email

Hope you had a wonderfull weekend and spent nice time among your friends. I sent an email to Ross in 11th of this month, but I do not know if she got my email or not? because I have not recieved any responce from her.
My application is underwent in the canadian embassy and I hope to get the Visa soon. I'm thinking to go to my twon, if I get the Visa and there is still enough time before leaving Saudi.

Wish you all the best and stay healthy
  

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I have underlined some problem areas: Hope you had a wonderfull weekend and spe nt nic e time among your friends. I sent an email to Ross in 11th of this month, but I do not know if she got my email or n ot? be cause I have not recieved any responce from her.

— Mister Micawber

  • I have underlined some problem areas: Hope you had a wonderfull weekend and spe nt nic e time among your friends.
  • I sent an email to Ross in 11th of this month, but I do not know if she got my email or n ot?
  • be cause I have not recieved any responce from her.
  • My application is underwent in the canadian embassy and I hope to get the Visa soon.
  • I'm thinking to go to my twon , if I get the Visa and there is still enough time before leaving Saudi.
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I have underlined some problem areas:

Hope you had a wonderfull weekend and spent nice time among your friends. I sent an email to Ross in 11th of this month, but I do not know if she got my email or not? because I have not recieved any responce from her.
My application is underwent in the canadian embassy and I hope to
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I tried to correct my words under you guidence, could you please check them.

1- you had wonderfull

2- spent a nice time

3- on 11th of this month

4- She got my email or not, because I have not recieved any responce from her. (I dont know my mistake)

5- is undergoing

6- In the Canadian
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Please post the revised text, nana-- that is, please make your revisions in the context.
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Here you are

Thank you for helping me.

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Hope you had wonderfull weekend and spent a nice time among your friends. I sent an email to Ross on 11th of this month, but I do not know if she got my email or not, because I have not recieved any responce from her.
My application is already
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Hope you had wonderfull (You paid no attention to my note, nana. I underlined this word, not 'a', and now you have 2 mistakes in this place.) weekend and spent a nice time among your friends. I sent an email to Ross on the 11th of this month, but I do not know if she got my email or not, because I have not recieved any responce from her. (Use you
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