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Chaminda senevirathne Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing

pls correct this

I herewith sending the 21,500.00 valued cheque (Cheque No 23568) which sent by depar beach resort to obtain dumping permit.
Please make necessary arrangements to issue dumping permit for above hotel.
  

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00 cheque (No 23568), which was sent by the Depar Beach Resort to obtain a dumping permit. Please make the necessary arrangements to issue the dumping permit for the above hotel. Question: Is "the above hotel" named "Depar Beach Resort"?

  • 00 cheque (No 23568), which was sent by the Depar Beach Resort to obtain a dumping permit.
  • Please make the necessary arrangements to issue the dumping permit for the above hotel.
  • Question: Is "the above hotel" named "Depar Beach Resort"?
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Is this ok?:

I am enclosing the 21,500.00 cheque (No 23568), which was sent by
the Depar Beach Resort to obtain a dumping permit. Please make the necessary arrangements to issue the dumping permit for the above hotel.

Question: Is "the above hotel" named "Depar Beach Resort"?
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Thanks for replying me. yes it is. the above hotel means depar beach resort. If there are further changes pls inform me.
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Chaminda senevirathnepls
That is not a valid word. Please http://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/english/please is.

You should also use a capital letter at the start of every sentence.

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