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Lynn1981 Posted 21 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Pls correct my translation homework

0 Shaoxing opera ,one of local dramas in East China, has been spread around the whole country in recent years. It is very popular with the public , because the tunes are pleasing, melodic and full of artistic appeal, while the librettos are simple and easy to be understood, unlike the Beijing Opera, full of lines in ancient poems, and hard for the audience to catch up with. 02br
00 The traditional subject of Shaoxing opera is ancient romance, usually in which , a poor intellectual fell in love with a beautiful gentlewoman born in a scholarly family. And the couple is predestinated to experience a lot of hardship, however, the ending of the story is always a happy reunion .Although a little bit stale, such story always gains tears and applause of the audience. 02br
00 Shaoxing opera made contribution to the popularization of splendid ancient culture in China because it adapt many famous Chinese classical novel, such as “The Romance of West Chamber” and “the Dream of Red Mansion”. 02br
00 Wish Shaoxing opera a thriving and prosperous future! 0-
  

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0 This is good, Lynn. just a few small points. 02br 02br 02br 02br 00Shaoxing opera ,one of THE local dramas in East China, has SPREAD around the whole country in recent years.

  • 0 This is good, Lynn.
  • just a few small points.
  • 02br 02br 02br 02br 00Shaoxing opera ,one of THE local dramas in East China, has SPREAD around the whole country in recent years.
  • It is very popular with the public , because the tunes are pleasing, melodic and full of artistic appeal, while the librettos are simple and easy to UNDERSTAND, unlike the Beijing Opera, WHICH IS full of lines FROM ancient poems, and hard for the audience to catch up with.
  • 02br 02br 00The traditional subject of Shaoxing opera is ancient romance, usually in which a poor intellectual FALLS in love with a beautiful gentlewoman born inTO a scholarly family.
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0 This is good, Lynn. just a few small points. 02br
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00Shaoxing opera ,one of THE local dramas in East China, has SPREAD around the whole country in recent years. It is very popular with the public , because the tunes are pleasing, melodic and full of artistic appeal, while the librettos are simple and easy to UNDERSTAND, unlike the Beijing Opera
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0abbie, thank you so much for your help and your words, in fact , I am always not confident in my translation work, so far I can't manage to use definite articles"the" correctly ,which has troubled me a lot since i began to learn english a few years ago. 05002br
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00 do you have msn ,maybe we can chat on msn. 02br
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0 Hi Lyn, 02br
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00Here is one of my posts from a previous thread on the topic of articles. It might help. 02br
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00Posted: 03-30-2005 12:26 PM 02br
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00The correct use of articles is acknowledged to be one of the most difficult points of English grammar, so don't be despondant Ali; mistakes don't usu
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0 thank you ! I got it!:) 0-

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