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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Pls correct my sentence, tq



Could you please reconfirm whether the commissioning team is still entitled for the overtime? Just to highlight you that I’ve sent the revised contract to the Commissioning Engineers that read as follows:



“Entire Article 7.3 shall be deleted”.



The effective date of this amendment is 1st December 2008.
  

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Hi, Could you please reconfirm whether the commissioning team is still entitled for the overtime? 3 shall be deleted”. The effective date of this amendment is 1 st December 2008.

  • Hi, Could you please reconfirm whether the commissioning team is still entitled for the overtime?
  • 3 shall be deleted”.
  • The effective date of this amendment is 1 st December 2008.
  • Please confirm that the commissioning team is entitled to overtime.
  • 3 shall be entirely deleted”.
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Hi,

Could you please reconfirm whether the commissioning team is still entitled for the overtime? Just to highlight you that I’ve sent the revised contract to the Commissioning Engineers that read as follows:

“Entire Article 7.3 shall be deleted”.

The effective date of this amendment is 1st December 2008.

Please confirm that the commissioning team

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