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Nana555 Posted 17 years ago
Grammar
Pls correct my paragraph
HI,Please correct my paragraph.
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Hi everybody,I'm so happy to back again to americana group,and sorry for being absence for long time because i went back to my country last month and when i came back here ,i was busy for my study.Any way, i would like to thank you all for helping me last semester.
1- i did listen to all ur advises and comment to make my presentation mor informative and attractive .
2-you gave me apportunity to practice many times until i felt comfortable to present my topic.
3-the day of presentation i was very confident,that i have never felt like that with my pervious presentations.
again thank you so much
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Hi everybody,I'm so happy to back again to americana group,and sorry for being absence for long time because i went back to my country last month and when i came back here ,i was busy for my study.Any way, i would like to thank you all for helping me last semester.
1- i did listen to all ur advises and comment to make my presentation mor informative and attractive .
2-you gave me apportunity to practice many times until i felt comfortable to present my topic.
3-the day of presentation i was very confident,that i have never felt like that with my pervious presentations.
again thank you so much
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Hi Nana,
Let's start with a few things. Capitalize the beginning of your sentences and the word "I."
You have three things as 1, 2, 3 -- that's not how we usually write in a friendly letter. Why don't you put them into a paragraph.
Advice is not countable.
Why don't you fix those things and we'll take another look.
Let's start with a few things. Capitalize the beginning of your sentences and the word "I."
You have three things as 1, 2, 3 -- that's not how we usually write in a friendly letter. Why don't you put them into a paragraph.
Advice is not countable.
Why don't you fix those things and we'll take another look.
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Hi Grammar geek,
Thank you so much for your help,May *** bless you.
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Hi everybody,I'm so happy to back again to americana group,and sorry for being absence for long time because I went back to my country last month and when I came back here ,I was
Thank you so much for your help,May *** bless you.
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Hi everybody,I'm so happy to back again to americana group,and sorry for being absence for long time because I went back to my country last month and when I came back here ,I was
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I'm not sure what the Americana Group is, but I assume is the name of a club of some sort?
Hi everybody,
I'm so happy to back with you in our Americana Group, and I'm sorry for being absent for such a long time. I went back to my country last month and when I returned ,I was very busy with my studies.
Anyway, I would like to thank you all for helping me last semester
Hi everybody,
I'm so happy to back with you in our Americana Group, and I'm sorry for being absent for such a long time. I went back to my country last month and when I returned ,I was very busy with my studies.
Anyway, I would like to thank you all for helping me last semester
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