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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Grammar
pls correct my letter
"Dear Mr. Michael,
On behalf of my Director Mr. Mohammed, I would like to ask if you're going to attend the PHOTO FAIR these September?
My Boss will be there and if your attending we are planning to have a Business meeting with you to discuss our future relation about
Photo hanging System.
Pls. confirm us as soon as possibe if you're attending the fair."
On behalf of my Director Mr. Mohammed, I would like to ask if you're going to attend the PHOTO FAIR these September?
My Boss will be there and if your attending we are planning to have a Business meeting with you to discuss our future relation about
Photo hanging System.
Pls. confirm us as soon as possibe if you're attending the fair."
Top answer
DO NOT use 'Mr' + first name''. Use first name only or 'Mr' + family name. Dear Michael, OR Dear Mr Smith, On behalf of my director, Mr.
- DO NOT use 'Mr' + first name''.
- Use first name only or 'Mr' + family name.
- Dear Michael, OR Dear Mr Smith, On behalf of my director, Mr.
- [family name] , I would like to ask if you're going to attend the Photo Fair this September.
- My boss will be there , and if you are attending , we would like to schedule a business meeting with you to discuss our future r elationship regarding the p hoto hanging system.
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DO NOT use 'Mr' + first name''. Use first name only or 'Mr' + family name.
Dear Michael,
OR
Dear Mr Smith,
On behalf of my director, Mr. [family name], I would like to ask if you're going to attend the Photo Fair this September.
My boss will be there, and if you are attending, we would li
Dear Michael,
OR
Dear Mr Smith,
On behalf of my director, Mr. [family name], I would like to ask if you're going to attend the Photo Fair this September.
My boss will be there, and if you are attending, we would li
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