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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Pls correct my grammar

The commemoration begins with the Eucharistic Celebration to be attended by every personnel guest and love ones.

May we respectfully request you to be the presider at this eucharistic celebration. This will be held the Chapel of Lourdes,
  

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personnel /will be attended by guests and loved ones will be held in the Chapel... I think the more normal term is "celebration of the Eucharist". [ Note use and non-use of capital letters.

  • personnel /will be attended by guests and loved ones will be held in the Chapel...
  • I think the more normal term is "celebration of the Eucharist".
  • [ Note use and non-use of capital letters.
  • ] When you finalize the second sentence, you will need a [ ?
  • ].
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personnel

/will be attended by guests and loved ones
will be held in the Chapel...
I think the more normal term is "celebration of the Eucharist". [ Note use and non-use of capital letters. ] When you finalize the second sentence, you will need a [ ? ].

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