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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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pls correct my english -Many Thank


Hi ,

We would like to inform you that we have sent the attached letter to Calum Booth , regarding his parking ticket .

If we haven't heard from you within seven days, we will deduct the amount from his next pay cheque.

Yours sincerely,
  

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Omit the comma before "regarding" -- but who is this letter to? Why should the recipient of this letter pay Calum's parking ticket? And why is it their business?

  • Omit the comma before "regarding" -- but who is this letter to?
  • Why should the recipient of this letter pay Calum's parking ticket?
  • And why is it their business?
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Omit the comma before "regarding" -- but who is this letter to? Why should the recipient of this letter pay Calum's parking ticket? And why is it their business?
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He is calum manager . if calum dispute the charge have to inform him .so i am sending same letter to him as well

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