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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Pls correct me o_O

hi everyone pls correct this sentence, coz i am not good in english.. thank you very much in advance, and merry christmas to all Christians Emotion: smile

"il close my eyes in thoughts of

you, so i could dream of you

forever.."

or:

"tonight i will close my eyes in

thoughts of you, and dream of

you forever"
  

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Thanks, and Merry Christmas to you and yours, whatever your faiths may be. And I certainly hope you wake up to a bright world after your beautiful dream. Both your versions work, in my opinion.

— Avangi

  • Thanks, and Merry Christmas to you and yours, whatever your faiths may be.
  • And I certainly hope you wake up to a bright world after your beautiful dream.
  • Both your versions work, in my opinion.
  • " And I urge you to use a capital i in "I" and "I"ll (two "l's"), and a capital "t" on the first word of your second version.
  • Best wishes, - A.
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Thanks, and Merry Christmas to you and yours, whatever your faiths may be. And I certainly hope you wake up to a bright world after your beautiful dream.

Both your versions work, in my opinion. I'd change the "could" to "may."

And I urge you to use a capital i in "I" and "I"ll (two "l's"), and a capital "t" on the first word of your second version.

Best wishes,
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