I am writing a motivational letter for the post of Assistant office manager would u please comment and correct it ASAP.Thanks
According to your vacancy announcement, I would like to express my interest working in the Embassy as “TWG Office Assistant Manager A1 (L)/C2”. My motivation for applying this post is my educational background (holder of Diploma in Secretarial Science and Office Management from Addis Ababa Commercial College in 2000 G.C. and Degree in Marketing and Sales Management from Addis Ababa University in 2007 G.C.), the training I took (Office Management, Quality Management System Development & Implementation based on ISO 9001:2000), the various work experience, and the duties and responsibilities mentioned in the post fit with the current status and familiar with the technology machines (computer literate word, excel, access, power point, publisher, outlook, fax, scanner, photocopy and binding machine) seem to be an excellent match with the post. Working with different organization makes me rich in experience and developing the habit of tactfulness, team work sprit, problem solving, handling multiple tasks, cooperativeness, responsible, accountability, initiative, punctual, competitive, committed, and sociable. My computer skills and related working machines also developed from the moment I start work up to know plus my well-honed interest in technology advances. In addition to this my carrier and aim is to be the best employee by achieving the embassy goals, vision, mission and objective and upgrade my self with education. I would like to say that if I become employee of your Embassy, I promise to be a worthy member of the embassy by using all my knowledge and applying all the above mentioned qualities and skills to keep the image, goodwill and well organized embassy. You can find my educational qualifications, work experience, skills in the enclosed resume. If you would like to have more information about my qualifications and skills, please contact me by e-mail: or phone. Thank you very much for considering my application. I look forward to your positive response. Sincerely yours,
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