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The Table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Table 1 Percentage of national consumer expenditure by category – 2002

The table compares the percentage of national consumer expenditure of five different countries in 2002 by three main items. Overall, in all five countries, citizens spend the highest proportion of their incomes on the first category – food, drink, and tobacco. The percentage of expenditure clothing, and education, in contrast, were significantly less.

The residents of Ireland and Turkey spend the highest percentage of their wages on food, drink, and tobacco, up to 28,91% and 32,14% respectively, in whilst, the remaining nations were not above 20%.

The citizens pay lower incomes for clothing and footwear and lowest for leisure and education. In Sweden, Ireland, Spain and Turkey, people spend only 6.43%, 6.51%, 5.40% and 6.63% on clothing and footwear respectively, Italy was possibly a little bit higher than the others, approximately 10%. Likewise, the average proportion of expenditure that residents spend on leisure and education was just only from 1.98% to 4.35% in these five countries.