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Thanhnam46 Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Pls! check this writing essay (IELTS task 1) for me!
This is my essay for task 1 (IN IELTS8 BOOK). Pls! give me some comment. Thanks for your attendances!
The line chart illustrates the amount of goods which is carried in the UK by four different sort of transportation during the period of time 1974 and 2002. Generally speaking, the major trend is upward.
It is clearly seen that road was the most efficiency way to transport goods in UK. In contrast, the least amount of merchandise is taken by the pipeline. Particularly, in 1974 the quantity of goods which was imported to UK by road started with 70 million tonnes. From 1974 to 1994, the amount of goods which is brought in UK show a fluctuation but the main trend was upward. Whereas, the volume of merchandise which was transported by rail way started with 39 million tonnes and also show a erratic movement but the major trend was downward. After that, it dipped at 27 million tonnes in 1995. From 1995 to 1998, the rail and road goods transportation increased dramatically by 13 million tonnes and 20 million tonnes respectively while the goods capacity went through pipeline remain stable at 22 million tons. Afterwards, the amount of products which are brought in UK by pipeline still level off while the other ways show a gradual growth from 1999 to 2002.
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The line chart illustrates the amount of goods which is carried in the UK by four different sort of transportation during the period of time 1974 and 2002. Generally speaking, the major trend is upward.
It is clearly seen that road was the most efficiency way to transport goods in UK. In contrast, the least amount of merchandise is taken by the pipeline. Particularly, in 1974 the quantity of goods which was imported to UK by road started with 70 million tonnes. From 1974 to 1994, the amount of goods which is brought in UK show a fluctuation but the main trend was upward. Whereas, the volume of merchandise which was transported by rail way started with 39 million tonnes and also show a erratic movement but the major trend was downward. After that, it dipped at 27 million tonnes in 1995. From 1995 to 1998, the rail and road goods transportation increased dramatically by 13 million tonnes and 20 million tonnes respectively while the goods capacity went through pipeline remain stable at 22 million tons. Afterwards, the amount of products which are brought in UK by pipeline still level off while the other ways show a gradual growth from 1999 to 2002.
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Dear Thanhnam46, You have made a valiant effort but you still have a lot of work to do. Here are a few corrections and thoughts on part of your paragraph. This line chart illustrates the amount of goods carried in the UK by four different types of transport from 1974 through 2002.
- Dear Thanhnam46, You have made a valiant effort but you still have a lot of work to do.
- Here are a few corrections and thoughts on part of your paragraph.
- This line chart illustrates the amount of goods carried in the UK by four different types of transport from 1974 through 2002.
- The overall trend in tonnage carried increased during the timeframe shown.
- Road transport was the most efficiency way to transport goods in UK.
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Dear Thanhnam46,
You have made a valiant effort but you still have a lot of work to do.
Here are a few corrections and thoughts on part of your paragraph.
This line chart illustrates the amount of goods carried in the UK by four different types of transport from 1974 through 2002. The overall trend in tonnage carried increased during the timeframe shown. Road transport w
You have made a valiant effort but you still have a lot of work to do.
Here are a few corrections and thoughts on part of your paragraph.
This line chart illustrates the amount of goods carried in the UK by four different types of transport from 1974 through 2002. The overall trend in tonnage carried increased during the timeframe shown. Road transport w
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Thank you so much! John. I will try harder. Now, I am working so I will try again tomorrow. Hope that you help me again! thanks
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thanhnam46
I WILL help you whenever you post to this thread.
Regards,
John
I WILL help you whenever you post to this thread.
Regards,
John
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This is my new essay. Check it for me!!! thank you.
The line chart illustrates the amount of goods which is carried in the UK by four different types of transport during the period of time 1974 and 2002. Generally speaking, the major trend was upward.
It is clearly seen that the tonnage carried by road got the biggest quantity. In contrast, the least amount of merchandise was mo
The line chart illustrates the amount of goods which is carried in the UK by four different types of transport during the period of time 1974 and 2002. Generally speaking, the major trend was upward.
It is clearly seen that the tonnage carried by road got the biggest quantity. In contrast, the least amount of merchandise was mo
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The line chart illustrates the amount of goods that were carried in the UK by four different types of transport during the period 1974 to 2002. Generally speaking, the major trend was upward.
It is clear that the most tonnage was carried by road. In contrast, the least amount of merchandise was moved by pi
It is clear that the most tonnage was carried by road. In contrast, the least amount of merchandise was moved by pi
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Thank you! It is really helps me. Could you please help me with another essay next time? And I have a question. In the introduction part, should I compose 1 sentence rather than 2 sentences? which way is better???
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good Guidelines for IELTS Essay Writing it will help Those Students who wish for appear in IELTS exam
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JohnParisThis line chart illustrates the amount of goods carried in the UK by four different types of transport from 1974 through 2002.It is worth mentioning that when talking about a range of numbers like that, use of the word through is part of American English in particular. It is not the case in the UK, where the correct word i
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