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0The government does not do a good job in helping the poor .Some government legislation are unfair to low income group. For example, the national health insurance fee are going to increase in the middle of 2007 , but the breadwinner, who are the official level income,will pay NT$600 per person for the insurance fee. This will occupy the total income of 10 percent , if they have 5 members without working. As a result, in 2006, almost 80000 households were living below the poverty line , according to Financial Department. This data has been caused by a significant incrase of unemployment rate.02br
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00The government does not help people who are the unemployed.( who can change the way to write because this is the same as The government does not do a good job in helping the poor) 02br
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Some government legislation 01font 00i02font 01font 00s02font 00 unfair to 01font 00the02font 00 low income group. For example, the national health insurance fee 01font 00is 02font 00going to increase in the middle of 2007 , but the breadwinner00s00, who01font 00 00are00 in02font 00 the official level income, will pay NT$600 per person for the insurance fee. 01font 01font 00Paying the fee will take 10 percent of their income, 02font 02font 00if 01font 00 02font 00they have 5 members without working.

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  • Some government legislation 01font 00i02font 01font 00s02font 00 unfair to 01font 00the02font 00 low income group.
  • For example, the national health insurance fee 01font 00is 02font 00going to increase in the middle of 2007 , but the breadwinner00s00, who01font 00 00are00 in02font 00 the official level income, will pay NT$600 per person for the insurance fee.
  • 01font 01font 00Paying the fee will take 10 percent of their income, 02font 02font 00if 01font 00 02font 00they have 5 members without working.
  • As a result, according to Financial Department, almost eighty thousands households were living below the poverty line in 2006.
  • It has been caused by a significant increase of the unemployment.
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0The government does not do a good job00 to help00 the poor .Some government legislation 01font00i02font01font00s02font00 unfair to 01font00the02font00 low income group. For example, the national health insurance fee 01font00is 
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0Nice job BW2, I'd just like to amend a couple of things.02br
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00The government does not do a good job 01b00of helping the poor02b00.02br
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00 5 members 01b00who are not02b00 working.02br
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00according to 01b00the Finance02b00 Department02br
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