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There is an opinion about whether to go on holiday in my own country or abroad. However, is it better or worse? Let us see.

First of all, it has many ways to impact the environment such as pollution, overpollution, and the burning of fossils,… However, it cannot be denied that some forms of travel damage the environment.

On the other hand, it’s more important to help the economy of my own country and abroad. For instance, if I travel in my own country, it is always cheaper than going abroad. However, I cannot know more about new cultures abroad. Also traveling abroad makes you better with new languages. But, it will more expensive.

In my point of view, you should learn more about the different regions of your own country before you learn about another country.

In conclusion, I firmly believe that going on holiday in your own country or abroad would have advantages and disadvantages. Therefore, tourists should be aware of the environment and choose a person who holidays whenever possible.