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As instructed by Tom , here are the resumes of the candidates from Brazil. The candidates had all been interviewed by Tom over the phone and based from the interview, he finds that Suelen, Bruno & Andre may be a good fit to our group. As such, a follow up interview in Brazil is just appropriate.
  

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When you are using first names, a formal register is not appropriate; be simple and direct: Here are the resumes of the candidates from Brazil that Tom asked me to send you. Tom has interviewed all of the candidates over the phone and based on those, he thinks that Suelen, Bruno and Andre may be a good fit to our group, so we should hold follow-up interviews with them in Brazil.

  • When you are using first names, a formal register is not appropriate; be simple and direct: Here are the resumes of the candidates from Brazil that Tom asked me to send you.
  • Tom has interviewed all of the candidates over the phone and based on those, he thinks that Suelen, Bruno and Andre may be a good fit to our group, so we should hold follow-up interviews with them in Brazil.
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When you are using first names, a formal register is not appropriate; be simple and direct:

Here are the resumes of the candidates from Brazil that Tom asked me to send you. Tom has interviewed all of the candidates over the phone and based on those, he thinks that Suelen, Bruno and Andre may be a good fit to our group, so we should hold follow-up inter

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