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Moli Posted 17 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Pls check my poem,thank you.
The special poem “strong”was written for those man who lost their family in the earthquake last year.
Dear wife,how kind you are! I like to look at you make up in the mirror and have the soup you made.
Lovely kid,how strong you are! I want to take you to the school and listen to your songs attentively.
Why do you go in a hurry,the house became quiet at once.My hair got white in a night.
I can’t help recalling your appearance.The photos feel cold to touch it,and hot tears pour down my face.
I look at the people in the street,but can’t find the direction to the home.
I always imagine that you are still alive,for there is hope in the life as long as we are together.
I can see the sun in the east.I must become stronger and stronger.
Dear wife,how kind you are! I like to look at you make up in the mirror and have the soup you made.
Lovely kid,how strong you are! I want to take you to the school and listen to your songs attentively.
Why do you go in a hurry,the house became quiet at once.My hair got white in a night.
I can’t help recalling your appearance.The photos feel cold to touch it,and hot tears pour down my face.
I look at the people in the street,but can’t find the direction to the home.
I always imagine that you are still alive,for there is hope in the life as long as we are together.
I can see the sun in the east.I must become stronger and stronger.
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We don't usually make each line a complete sentence when we write poems. Be sure to leave a space after commas and periods. g.
- We don't usually make each line a complete sentence when we write poems.
- Be sure to leave a space after commas and periods.
- g.
- Dear wife, how kind you are (Note the space after wife,)
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We don't usually make each line a complete sentence when we write poems.
Be sure to leave a space after commas and periods.
e.g. Dear wife, how kind you are (Note the space after wife,)
Be sure to leave a space after commas and periods.
e.g. Dear wife, how kind you are (Note the space after wife,)
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