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Obiajulu Posted 21 years ago
Letter Writing
Pls check my motivation letter and make necessary corrections immediately
Dear Sid,
As you might already know my name is Ernest Obosi II. I am twenty one years old and i am a Nigerian. I am a Computer Scientist by profession (most people think i am way to young). When i am not handling any office work i love to watch movies, read novel (John Grisham, Anne Rice, Jeffery Archer, J.K Rowlings), martial arts (Taekwondo to be exact). Basically because it helps me stay focused and disciplined.
I am excited to be applying for an internship to Indus technology and joining your team.
As part of my training, I am required to know PHP and MYSQL. In order for me to work accurately and give back something beneficial to the company. I would greatly appreciate the opportunity to be a member of your working group. That would complete my programming experience requirement and more importantly would provide me with invaluable experience and contacts, both of which are highly valued.
During service year after Computer Science, I have acquired a strong [or superior] knowledge PHP and MYSQL as well as Project management. During my training, I have obtained basic PHP and MYSQL experience as a scientist as well as a team worker.
I am a motivated and curious person who can easily adapt to any situation. I thrive on overcoming challenges. My coworkers know me to be a very effective and helpful team player. I enjoy learning from others and helping others where I can. I am excited by the opportunity to join a group of professionals where I can apply my skills, talents, and enthusiasm.
I look forward to meeting you.
Sincerely,
Obiajulu.
As you might already know my name is Ernest Obosi II. I am twenty one years old and i am a Nigerian. I am a Computer Scientist by profession (most people think i am way to young). When i am not handling any office work i love to watch movies, read novel (John Grisham, Anne Rice, Jeffery Archer, J.K Rowlings), martial arts (Taekwondo to be exact). Basically because it helps me stay focused and disciplined.
I am excited to be applying for an internship to Indus technology and joining your team.
As part of my training, I am required to know PHP and MYSQL. In order for me to work accurately and give back something beneficial to the company. I would greatly appreciate the opportunity to be a member of your working group. That would complete my programming experience requirement and more importantly would provide me with invaluable experience and contacts, both of which are highly valued.
During service year after Computer Science, I have acquired a strong [or superior] knowledge PHP and MYSQL as well as Project management. During my training, I have obtained basic PHP and MYSQL experience as a scientist as well as a team worker.
I am a motivated and curious person who can easily adapt to any situation. I thrive on overcoming challenges. My coworkers know me to be a very effective and helpful team player. I enjoy learning from others and helping others where I can. I am excited by the opportunity to join a group of professionals where I can apply my skills, talents, and enthusiasm.
I look forward to meeting you.
Sincerely,
Obiajulu.
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Hello Obiajulu-- welcome to English Forums. _ _______ , ( don't use the first name ) As you might already know, my name is Ernest Obosi II. I am a 21-year-old Nigerian.
- Hello Obiajulu-- welcome to English Forums.
- _ _______ , ( don't use the first name ) As you might already know, my name is Ernest Obosi II.
- I am a 21-year-old Nigerian.
- I am a computer scientist by profession.
- I am excited to be applying for an internship with Indus Technology in order to join your team.
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Hello Obiajulu-- welcome to English Forums. I would make these amendations:
Dear Mr.________ , (don't use the first name)
As you might already know, my name is Ernest Obosi II. I am a 21-year-old Nigerian. I am a computer scientist by profession. I am excited to be applying for an internship with Indus Technology in order to join your team.
Duri
Dear Mr.________ , (don't use the first name)
As you might already know, my name is Ernest Obosi II. I am a 21-year-old Nigerian. I am a computer scientist by profession. I am excited to be applying for an internship with Indus Technology in order to join your team.
Duri
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