Pls check my letter writing

Hi,
I've just done a writing test and need someone help get it correct.
Thanks in advance.

You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements.
Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter

• explain what you like about the cafeteria
• say what is wrong with it
• suggest how it could be improved

Dear Sir/Madam,

I’m writing this letter to express my interests in college cafeteria where I often have my lunch. I really enjoy the food and service there. However, the only thing which I’m not really happy about is the coffee and I think there are some ways to make it better.

I have lunch at college cafeteria almost 5 days a week and my favourite dishes are steak and sausage. Their taste is different from other restaurants that I have tried and is really nice. It takes only approximately from 5 to 7 minutes to get the food ready, so I just need to wait for a short.

As my habit, I always have coffee after polishing my lunch off. Unfortunately, the coffee is not as nice as the food. I have tried different kinds of coffee, such as cappuccino or latte…, but none of them is delicious.

I think there is always a way to get things improved. In this case, a better coffee machine would be a solution as well as better quality raw coffee. When the coffee becomes better, there are no doubts that the cafeteria will attract more customers, who could be tempted by coffee like me.

Yours faithfully,
Eddie