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The8ight Posted 19 years ago
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pls check my English in cv and in motivation letter :) ty

1span00EDUCATION:02span02br
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01span002006 – present00 02span00Master of Science in International Business Economics 01span00issued by02br
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01span002003 – 200602span01span00 02span01span00Bachelor of Administration at the 00 of 00 and International Law in 00.02span02br
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01span002004 – 200500 00Diploma of Photographic 00 in 00.00 02span02br
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01span001999 – 200300 00Graduated form High School Mikolaja Reja in 00.02span02br
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01span00EXPERIENCE:02span02br
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01span002002-present00 00 02span01span00Working as an amateur photographer.02span01span02span02br
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01span00 00 02span01span00Main achievements:02span02br
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01span00-00 02span01span00portfolios.02span02br
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01span00-00 02span01span00photo session for a shop “World of clasp”.02span01span02span02br
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01span00-00 02span01span00designed a brochure for polish sled dog team “Nefryt”.02span01span02span02br
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01b01span002005-00 02span02b00Casino Accounting Representative in 00 Resorts Int.02br
00Main activities and responsibilities:01span00 02span02br
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00-00 00responsible for 00daily00 00audits in markers, slots, master games report, slot data system, Ardac, cage, simulcasting.02br
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01span00-00 02span00dealing with special projects.01span02span02br
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01span00-00 02span00dutes included the collecton, verification and retention of all documents utilized on the casino floor.01span02span02br
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01span002005-00 02span01span00Director Assistant of Special Events in House of Blues.02span02br
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00-00 00responsible for helping with directing and coordinating the activities of Special Events department.02br
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00-00 00assisting in creating departmental budget, implement and oversee departmental accounting paperwork, along with weekly sales recap report.02br
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01span00-00 02span01span00Build and maintain client database (internal & external sources) convention business, meeting planners, party planners, manage the banquet book, and fundraising events.02span02br
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01span002004-00 02span01span00 00 02span01span00Admin Assistant in 00 Tesco.02span02br
00Main activities and responsibilities:01span00 02span02br
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01span00-00 02span01span00make sure all the cash is secure and accurate.02span02br
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01span00-00 02span01span00keep reports up to date and carry out checks so the store is always legal.02span02br
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01span00-00 02span01span00responsible for all staff being paid correctly and on time.02span02br
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01span00-00 02span01span00provide accurate and up to date info and admin support.02span02br
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01span00-00 02span01span00maintain the news and magazines administration.02span02br
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01span00-00 02span01span00support the team by making sure all equipment, uniform and stationery is available.02span02br
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01span002001-0300 00Summer Jobs in 00: housekeeping, 02span01span00distributing02span01span00 02span01span00leaflets02span01span00, gardening,00 00watchman, kitchen porter, salesman.02span01span00 02span01span02span02br
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00COMPUTER SKILLS:00 02br
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00 - 00 00IBM compatible PCs running Windows 95, 98, Me, 2000, Xp.02br
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00- 00 00Ms Office: Word, 00Outlook,00 Excel, Power Point.02br
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00- 00 00Adobe: Photoshop, Illustrator.02br
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01b00LANGUAGES:02b02br
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01b00Polish – 02b00mother tongue.01b02b02br
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01b00English – advanced, summer courses in 00 (Richmond Collage).02b02br
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01b00French – very basic.02b02br
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00INTERESTS:02br
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00-00 00advertising 02br
00(00laureate of slogan contest organized by a “Ortis” company in 2005)02br
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00-00 00gaming02br
00(the best polish counter-strike player in seasons 1999,2000)02br
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00(used to be one of the best polish quake3 and star craft: brood wars, players)02br
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00-00 00cinema02br
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01b00-00 02b00psychology01b02b02br
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01span00I’m a nice and funny Polish student who is/has:02span02br
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01span00-00 02span01span00hard-working02span02br
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01span00-00 02span01span00good group leader and team worker02span02br
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01span00-00 02span01span00reliable - willing and able to show up on time02span02br
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01span00-00 02span01span00honest and trustworthy02span02br
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01span00-00 02span01span00numeric skills, attention to detail02span02br
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01span00-00 02span01span00keyboard skills, computer literate02span02br
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01b00-00 02b01span00good attitude, patient with other people, willing to help, do my share, willing to learn.02span01b02b02br
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01span00Dear Sir or Madam,02br
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00 I enclose my curriculum vitae in response to your advertisement in jobs.pl, 02span00ref. 1-12-432101span00. I would like to apply for the position advertising assistant of your company. 02span02br
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01span00If your company benefit from an enthusiastic person, with more than one year of experiences in accounting, ability to manage staff problems and understanding company structures. If so, we should talk.02span02br
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01span00The position interests me for several reasons. I have been interested in advertising since the beginning of my studies and would like to work in this field in future. While working on my bachelor of Administration (bachelor title: “Photography in advertising”), I gained a valuable knowledge of technical and law problems of advertise, also during studies I managed to finish 00. Nowadays I am studying 02span00International Business Economics 01span00issued by the 00 of 02span01span00 in 00.02span02br
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01span00I have one-year experience in the finance of the companies Resorts Casino and London Tesco, where I had a chance to put into practice the knowledge I learned at university. As an accountant I was responsible for keeping accounting records correct and on time, analyzed financial statements, produced reports and input data on a computer system, so I became familiar with using any kind of Software. I also posted to a general ledger and generated monthly reports.02span02br
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01span00My knowledge and my skills however are not limited only to accounting area. I have proven ability to manage international training in management and organization skills. 02span02br
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01span00I easily learn new things and I am open to new challenges. I am precise, dependable, hardworking and full of good attitude person, which in my opinion is very important in advertising. I enjoy working pressed for time. I am good at handling stress situations, where one has to act quickly and calmly. I am a creative, articulate person who finds it easy to communicate with others. I can work efficiently both in a team and individually. 02span02br
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01span00I am strongly convinced that my background is in perfect line with you current needs and that I can apply my knowledge and skills to the position. My enclosed CV provides additional details about my background. Thank you for your consideration.02span02br
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01span00I look forward to hearing from you.02span02br
01span00Yours faithfully02span0-
  

Top answer

0Go through and check your spellings as you have quite a few errors that are probably typos, for example, 'form' instead of 'from'. The CV is a bit 'blah' just not very interesting - there is nothing here to make you stand out. Instead of just listing duties try to think about the qualities an employer wants and how you can prove that you have them.

— Nona the brit

  • 0Go through and check your spellings as you have quite a few errors that are probably typos, for example, 'form' instead of 'from'.
  • The CV is a bit 'blah' just not very interesting - there is nothing here to make you stand out.
  • Instead of just listing duties try to think about the qualities an employer wants and how you can prove that you have them.
  • Think about selling your abilities.
  • Advertising/marketing is very difficult to get into with a great deal of competition for entry level jobs - you have to make your CV sit up and bite them so it stands out from the other hundreds they will receive.
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0Go through and check your spellings as you have quite a few errors that are probably typos, for example, 'form' instead of 'from'. The CV is a bit 'blah' just not very interesting - there is nothing here to make you stand out. Instead of just listing duties try to think about the qualities an employer wants and how you can prove that you have them. Think about selling your abilities. Advertisin
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Ho. Could You even check my cv?
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