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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Pls check my email, which to enquire my job application

Hi, i wrote this email is would like to enquire my job application as a Computer Technician, as last week I had emailed my resume to the HR department. Hope to hear you soon either the application is in process or failed. Thanks.

Hello, 2 weeks ago i emailed my resume to a several of companies. And now, i would like to ask them whether iam been rejected or the application is in processing. So please correct above sentenses. Anyway, please help to add some words or phrase, so that it can make my sentenses seems more politely. Thanks...
  

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Anonymous Hi, i wrote this email is would like to enquire my job application as a Computer Technician, as last week I had emailed my resume to the HR department. Hope to hear you soon either the application is in process or failed. Thanks.

  • Anonymous Hi, i wrote this email is would like to enquire my job application as a Computer Technician, as last week I had emailed my resume to the HR department.
  • Hope to hear you soon either the application is in process or failed.
  • Thanks.
  • Hello, 2 weeks ago i emailed my resume to a several of companies.
  • And now, i would like to ask them whether iam been rejected or the application is in processing.
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AnonymousHi, i wrote this email is would like to enquire my job application as a Computer Technician, as last week I had emailed my resume to the HR department. Hope to hear you soon either the application is in process or failed. Thanks.

Hello, 2 weeks ago i emailed my resume to a several of companies. And now, i would like to ask them whether iam been rejecte
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Do NOT say to each company that you have sent you your resume to them and several others. That's like saying that you don't really care to work there - unless they happen to be the first to offer you a job.

Recently I sent a resume to [name of company - and make sure you change this for every one you send!] for the position as a computer technician. I would greatly appreciate it

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