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Naked chef Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Pls check grammar. only three lines! don't need too much time!

Dear sir,

Could you please help me with checking grammar?I'm have less self confident.

"New books can be reserved in the display period and take them out starting from 24 August 2011. New ** books with Audio CD are available to borrow at the (Place)."

Naked Chef

thanks a lot in advance
  

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) but these are my suggestions: New books can be reserved now and will be available for sale ( for rent, for check-out, to borrow ) starting 24 August 2011. " Hope this helps, John

— JohnParis

  • ) but these are my suggestions: New books can be reserved now and will be available for sale ( for rent, for check-out, to borrow ) starting 24 August 2011.
  • " Hope this helps, John
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Dear Naked,

A bit more context would be helpful (i.e., are you takling about a library here?) but these are my suggestions:

New books can be reserved now and will be available for sale (for rent, for check-out, to borrow) starting 24 August 2011.

"New ** books with Audio CD are available to
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Dear JohnParis,

Thank you for your help.

I just want to announce that new books are displayed in the library and members can reserve those new books in the display period and they can take them out after display period. Our library here don't sale books. Members can do borrowing only.

Thanks!

With regards,

Naked chef
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Dear Naked,

That's what I thought, and that's why I asked if you were speaking of a library.

You have a couple of choices for your sentence, and you should choose the one that best fits your clientele.

  1. Books currently on display and can be reserved now and will be available to borrow starting on the 24th of August, 2011
  2. During the current display period
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