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0I wrote a essay, could someone check it? Topic: unversities should accept equal number of male and female students in every subject. Do you agree or disagree?02br
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00There are numerous debates about the issue whether or not accept equal number of male and female students at school.Therefore some people suggect that every subject should have balanced number of different gendar. In my opinion, it should not be obeyed as a rule because some factors are more important than gaining balanced number of both gendar.02br
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00There is no doubt that the equal both gendar studnets in the same class tend to complement each other both physically and psychologically ,bringing their talents and strengeths into soceity. This situation is centainly benefit for primary school untill high school as well as improving each other corporation. But university provides students to learn profeesional skills and knowledge as not as the element of learning , in order to using their future. Therfore, university policise should spotlight a varity of useful books and the supply of teachers.02br
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00The second consideration of not balanced both gendar in every subject is that some subects such as aorplane engine fixing and history studying are more popluar in specific gendar.If universities want to enrol more, the target is after all beyond shools' reach.As a result , some students are forced to choose an interested subject and special subjects might lose chances to educate higher skill students.02br
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00In conclusion, even balanced both gendar in each subjcet has signifiacnt benefit, when considering bachelor's degress is not as same as primary school. University should fouce on how to develop student capability in increasing our life.02br
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00 Pls check it and teaching my conclusion Thank a lot0-
  

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0I took a quick glance at your essay. 01blockquote 01cite 10Special Fen12cite 10Topic: unversities should accept equal number of male and female students in every subject. 12br 12br 10There are numerous debates about 11font 10the issue12font 10 whether or not 11i 10____ accept _12i 10 (article) equal number of male and female students at school.

  • 0I took a quick glance at your essay.
  • 01blockquote 01cite 10Special Fen12cite 10Topic: unversities should accept equal number of male and female students in every subject.
  • 12br 12br 10There are numerous debates about 11font 10the issue12font 10 whether or not 11i 10____ accept _12i 10 (article) equal number of male and female students at school.
  • Therefore some people 11b 11i 10suggect12i 10 12b 10that every subject should have __ (article) balanced number of different 11b 11i 10gendar12i 12b 10.
  • ) 11i 11b 10gendar12b 10 11b 10studnets12b 12i 10 in the same class 11b 10tend to complement each other 12b 10both physically and psychologically ,bringing their talents and 11b 11i 10strengeths12i 12b 10 into soceity.
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0I took a quick glance at your essay. You misspelled some words (see the italized) and you also tend to leave out articles.01blockquote
01cite10Special Fen12cite10Topic: unversities should accept equal number of male and female students in every subject. Do you agree or disagree?12br
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0This is your essay after checking grammar and spelling.02br
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00"There are numerous debates about the issue whether or not accept equal number of male and female students at school. Therefore some people suggest that every subject should have balanced number of different gender. In my opinion, it should not be obeyed as a rule because some factors are more important than

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