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Agrawal.ashu Posted 20 years ago
Letter Writing

Pls check for any grammatical mistake

Hi All,

I am writing the below enclosed letter to my boss after a long gap. I am looking for release from my current project and want to re-join my previous boss again. I want to contact him regarding this and want his help to get release from current project.

Pls advise me if there is any grammatical mistake or any suggestion.

Thanks in advance!

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I hope you are well and ABC is growing in size and profitability.

*** project is stable and running with 100% of usage.

I am planning to get release from ***, I wish to discuss with you about availability of any new assignment for me. I am looking for change in my functional responsibilities and work.

I am expecting my promotion in current promotion cycle and I hope it would be done by this month (as first level of recommendation has already been done).

After completion of the promotion process I am wishing for my release to happen. I seek your valuable suggestion and support in this regard.

Thanks and Regards

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Dear Mr. ***: I hope you are well and that ABC is growing in size and profitability. The *** project is stable and running at 100% of {(usage?

  • Dear Mr.
  • ***: I hope you are well and that ABC is growing in size and profitability.
  • The *** project is stable and running at 100% of {(usage?
  • capacity?
  • )} I am hoping to be released from ***, and I would like to discuss with you the possibility of any new assignment for me.
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Dear Mr. ***:

I hope you are well and that ABC is growing in size and profitability.

The *** project is stable and running at 100% of {(usage? capacity? meaning is not clear.)}

I am hoping to be released from ***, and I would like to discuss with you the possibility of any new assignment for me. I am looking for a change in my responsibilities and work.

I expec
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I wish to discuss with you about availability of any new assignment for me.

I want to discuss a probability of any new assignment for me with you.

I am wishing for my release to happen.

I wish my release happen.

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Hi,

Welcome to the Forum.

I've made some suggestions.

Best wishes, Clive

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I hope you are well and that ABC is growing in size and profitability.

*** project is stable and
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Dear Clive & All,

Thanks a lot for your great suggestions and time. This is really great concept...!

Warm Regards,

Ashutosh
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Anybody please check the grammetical error in this sentense

thanks

"It has been more than 3 years since I have worked under the job role mentioned in your advertised vacancy."

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Agrawal.ashuHi All,

I am writing the below enclosed letter to my boss after a long gap. I am looking for release from my current project and
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Anybody please check the grammetical error in this sentense

thanks

"It has been more than 3 years since I have worked under the job role mentioned in your advertised vacancy."

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Agrawal.ashuHi All,

I am writing the below enclosed letter to my boss after a long gap. I am looking for release from my current project and
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Hi,

Anybody please check the grammetical error in this sentense

thanks

"It has been more than 3 years since I have worked under the job role mentioned in your advertised vacancy."

"I have been working for more than 3 years in the job role mentioned in your advertised vacancy."
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Dear Sir,


I am sending RCS updated percentage report to inform you about the accuracy of the system

of 26th june 2007.for detail please check the attach file.



Thanks And Regards,

Yogesh Futane,
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Hi,

Dear Sir,



I am sending an RCS updated percentage report to inform you about the accuracy of the system on 26th June 2007. For details, please check the attached file.




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