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TANICKA Posted 19 years ago
Letter Writing

Pls can someone check my Motivation letter

0Having majored in Accounting and Information System as an02br
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00In 2006 i graduated with great grades at Chang Jung Christian University. During my study I have been to Austria for one year, where I have attended courses at JKU in Linz .00 00It helped me to 01b00broaden my cultural awareness and see the world from a completely different perspective.02b00 00After studying in Austria I am able to quickly assimilate into new surroundings and became more independence and self-confidence. I am well versed in two three different languages--Chinese, English, German and would like to learn Czech language. 00As I know, Taiwanese electronics companies are using the Czech Republic as a production launching pad for sales because00 00The Czech Republic is the closest country among the new EU accession states to western Europe - the main market of the Taiwanese electronics companies.02br
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00From 2002 to 2004 I worked as an assistant in 00***. 00At that time 00I found my work at the -------(company's name) particularly valuable in teaching me how to deal with diverse customer needs. 00My duties also included gathering the data from customers` feedback.02br
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00My present work is as saleswoman in a Taiwanese company, our company export products all over the world especially European countries. Due to my job I have to contact with customers from Europe, 00working with different people presents me with a rare opportunity to challenge myself to become more professional. 00It is very important to get further knowledge about Trading and international business.02br
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00My long-term goal is working in an international company and deal with other People from the world and creating efficient working styles in my field.00 I am confident that with my personality, experienced and academic background, I will have a solid foundation for a fulfilling career.02br
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00I hope that I will have the opportunity to improve my knowledge in the master’s program. 01b00Feel free to contact me at any time concerning additional questions.02b02br
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00Yours faithfully,0-
  

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02br 02br 00In 2006 01b 00I02b 00 graduated with great grades 01b 00from02b 00 Chang Jung Christian University. During my 01b 00studies I spent one year in Austria02b 00, where I 01del 01b 00have02b 02del 00 attended courses at JKU in Linz . It helped me to broaden my cultural awareness and see the world from a completely different perspective.

  • 02br 02br 00In 2006 01b 00I02b 00 graduated with great grades 01b 00from02b 00 Chang Jung Christian University.
  • During my 01b 00studies I spent one year in Austria02b 00, where I 01del 01b 00have02b 02del 00 attended courses at JKU in Linz .
  • It helped me to broaden my cultural awareness and see the world from a completely different perspective.
  • 00 I am well versed in 00two three00 different languages--Chinese, English01b 00 and02b 00 German and would like to learn 01b 00the02b 00 Czech language.
  • 02br 02br 02br 02br 00From 2002 to 2004 I worked as an assistant in ***.
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0A few amendments made for you in bold and you need to look again at the highlighted areas.02br
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00In 2006 01b00I02b00 graduated with great grades 01b00from02b00 Chang Jung Christian University. During my 01b00studies I spent one year in Austria02b00, where I 01del01b00have02b

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