pls. anyone here can revise my overtime letter

good morning! pls. help me guys .tnx :-)

August 26, 2012

Mr. Abdullah Al Dwiesh
General Manager
Diet Watchers

Thru: Ms. Sabrin Bittar
Center Manager
Diet Watchers

Dear Ma'am/Sir,

I would like to file my 4 days overtime from August 18- up 21, 2012. I was asked to work overtime on Eid Holidays for the meal counting.

I am hoping for your confirmation regarding this matter.


God Bless!

Sincerely,
Irene B. Remaldora