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Asta Maria Posted 9 years ago
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A man who risks everything to be with his dream girl for just one day by pretending to be her boyfriend after she suffers temporary memory loss.
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Denchai, a 30-year-old geeky IT officer, is in love with his colleague Nui but does not have the courage to express his feelings towards her. He finally gets his chance during the company trip to Hokkaido. He makes a wish to be with Nui for just one day, and his wish comes true after she suffers temporary memory loss in a skiing accident by pretending to be her boyfriend.
Short plot
A man who risks everything to be with his dream girl for just one day by pretending to be her boyfriend after she suffers temporary memory loss.
Long plot
Denchai, a 30-year-old geeky IT officer, is in love with his colleague Nui but does not have the courage to express his feelings towards her. He finally gets his chance during the company trip to Hokkaido. He makes a wish to be with Nui for just one day, and his wish comes true after she suffers temporary memory loss in a skiing accident by pretending to be her boyfriend.
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Hi, anyone can help me to check this? Thank you.
- Hi, anyone can help me to check this?
- Thank you.
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