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Anonymous Posted 9 years ago
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Are these synopses grammatically correct?

Short summary
A young man who disguises himself as a female nurse in order to get close to a young doctor he has fallen in love with. Will he able to wins her heart?

Long Summary
SK, an aspiring actor who wants be a successful actor falls for Rita, a doctor. When SK comes to know that Rita is already engaged, he disguises himself as a nurse and joins the same hospital, to woo her. Can he able to express the love to Rita?
  

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Short summary A young man who [you keep making this mistake] disguises himself as a female nurse in order to get close to a young doctor he has fallen in love with. Will he able to wi n h er heart? Long Summary SK, an aspiring actor who wants be a successful acto r, falls for Rita, a doctor.

  • Short summary A young man who [you keep making this mistake] disguises himself as a female nurse in order to get close to a young doctor he has fallen in love with.
  • Will he able to wi n h er heart?
  • Long Summary SK, an aspiring actor who wants be a successful acto r, falls for Rita, a doctor.
  • When SK comes to know that Rita is already engaged, he disguises himself as a nurse and joins the same hospita l t o woo her.
  • Can he able to express the his love to Rita?
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Short summary
A young man who [you keep making this mistake] disguises himself as a female nurse in order to get close to a young doctor he has fallen in love with. Will he able to win her heart?

Long Summary
SK, an aspiring actor who wants be a successful actor, falls for Rita,
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I'm sorry teechr, Sometimes I really get stuck with "who". Basically, I should remove the "who" right?
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AnonymousBasically, I should remove the "who" right?
Yes, you should in that sentence. However, I'd like you to write a simple sentence using "who" as a relative pronoun, just to make sure that you know how to use it.
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That's great. Ok, let me try with the sentence.

Sk who falls in love with a beautiful nurse, Rita.
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AnonymousSk who falls in love with a beautiful nurse, Rita.
That is not a sentence. You should be able to remove the relative clause and be left with a sentence with a subject and verb.

Sik [who falls in love with a beautiful nurse, Rita.]

The relative clause is in brackets. If you remove that, you get this:
Sik

Obv
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Alright, how about this?

An aspiring actor, who wants to falls for Rita, a doctor, disguises himself as a nurse in order to get close.
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An aspiring actor who wants to fall for Rita, a doctor, disguises himself as a nurse in order to get close to her.

It seems to me that a person does not decide ahead of time to fall in love with someone, it just happens.

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