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Hi, please check the sentence structure and the grammar. Thank you.
Short summary
In 1974, a young man and his girlfriend break out of a mental hospital to fulfill his dream of killing Elvis Presley, the King of Rock’n’Roll.
Long summary
Karen Bird and Jack Blueblood, two young lovers who escape a mental institution to travel to Los Angeles in a bid to kill the King of Rock’n’Roll, Elvis Presley. After coming up with the scheme following a vision from Jack's dead mother, the pair set off on their journey in the summer of 1974, vowing to murder their idol and anyone else who gets in the way.
Short summary
In 1974, a young man and his girlfriend break out of a mental hospital to fulfill his dream of killing Elvis Presley, the King of Rock’n’Roll.
Long summary
Karen Bird and Jack Blueblood, two young lovers who escape a mental institution to travel to Los Angeles in a bid to kill the King of Rock’n’Roll, Elvis Presley. After coming up with the scheme following a vision from Jack's dead mother, the pair set off on their journey in the summer of 1974, vowing to murder their idol and anyone else who gets in the way.
Top answer
small changes on the short synopsis: In the summer of 1974, a young man and his girlfriend break out of a rehab center and head to Los Angeles to kill the King of Rock'n' Roll, Elvis Presley.
- small changes on the short synopsis: In the summer of 1974, a young man and his girlfriend break out of a rehab center and head to Los Angeles to kill the King of Rock'n' Roll, Elvis Presley.
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small changes on the short synopsis:
In the summer of 1974, a young man and his girlfriend break out of a rehab center and head to Los Angeles to kill the King of Rock'n' Roll, Elvis Presley.
In the summer of 1974, a young man and his girlfriend break out of a rehab center and head to Los Angeles to kill the King of Rock'n' Roll, Elvis Presley.
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AnonymousIn the summer of 1974, a young man and his girlfriend break out of a rehab center and head to Los Angeles to kill the King of Rock 'n' Roll, Elvis Presley.
AnonymousKaren Bird and Jack Blueblood are two young lovers who escape from a mental institution to travel to Los Angeles in a bid to kill the King of
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