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Jenn123 Posted 10 years ago
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Can someone please review my paragraph?
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Karthick, a convict out on parole finds employment as the caretaker of Vikramadithya multi-millionaire, who is a quadriplegic. Over a period of time the duo bond over their camaraderie.
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Karthick, a petty thief comes out of jail on parole. His mother disowns him as she thinks he would spoil his siblings as well. He is in dire need of a job that will show him as a do-gooder to get a permanent release from jail. Vikram, a quadriplegic billionaire, is on the look out for a caretaker. After interviewing a dozen men, he chooses Karthick. Karthick accepts the job with initial reluctance. How the duo bond over their camaraderie and help solve each other’s problems?
Short paragraph
Karthick, a convict out on parole finds employment as the caretaker of Vikramadithya multi-millionaire, who is a quadriplegic. Over a period of time the duo bond over their camaraderie.
Long paragraph
Karthick, a petty thief comes out of jail on parole. His mother disowns him as she thinks he would spoil his siblings as well. He is in dire need of a job that will show him as a do-gooder to get a permanent release from jail. Vikram, a quadriplegic billionaire, is on the look out for a caretaker. After interviewing a dozen men, he chooses Karthick. Karthick accepts the job with initial reluctance. How the duo bond over their camaraderie and help solve each other’s problems?
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Can someone please review my paragraph?
- Can someone please review my paragraph?
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